live brief: Crit Feedback

Competition submissions:

the work that is assessed is what is proposed on boards:

Crit feedback:

_ 5 things i would like feedback on:

_ Does the story line work effectively?
_ Does the advert plot - Attract people to the Marriott?
_ Does the colour scheme reflect the marriott?
_ Are the characters used appropriate?

Feedback:

_ Modernise the design making it appeal to the younger generation
_ The rockstars couldnt bring them self to destroy and trash the hotel - to good to touch
_ Look into popular bands to target the younger audience
_ Hangover ideas - showing balance between partying and relaxing -

Live brief Development: Rockstar idea.

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